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Dragon Warrior I Review

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This one is by me.  Would appreciate feedback.

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Not bad at all. You have some very professional editing, the sound quality is solid, and the cartoon figure is a very nice touch.

Some thoughts:
* I think you could take a little more time to edit and practice your lines; there are no real pauses in your speech that allow the audience to digest what you've said, and everything is presented in the same tone of voice, making important details blend in together.
* Instead of showing us film of the merchandise, take some nice pictures against a clean background and splice them in. Your hands holding the merchandise tends to make things wobble.

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Thanks for the feedback.  I plan on doing more of these, so I’ll take that all into consideration.

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I really loved it! Cant wait to see you talk about Dragon Warrior II. You seem really intelligent when talking about this game.

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On 6/1/2018 at 9:33 PM, Neofrodo said:

I really loved it! Cant wait to see you talk about Dragon Warrior II. You seem really intelligent when talking about this game.

Thank you!  I’ll be sure to post the DWII review when I’m done with it.

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