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Poem, "Introduction"

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"Introduction"

 

I haven't made any monuments. Never had any bronze.
My name won't be forgotten, because nobody knows it anyway.
 
But I'm fine with that.
 
Because I make your world alive.
I draw the sun, rivers and trees
using colours unseen to eyes
making details so easy to miss
 
I give a voice to the nature
transcending the limits of ears
making every plant and creature
best composer in this world here.
 
I can make the sweetest honey sour,
lemon sweet and peach - spicy
I make you feel slimy wall of tower
shiver from cold of wind so icy
 
Because I'm the blacksmith of your dreams,
I forge you ones you can easily wield,
Armour so strong you can survive extremes
I'll be taking good care of you, my child
 
I am my own creation
I am 
You
Edited by Sk8erpunq
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That is pretty good. I want one of those lemons.

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Thanks, Democrobot! That'd be five rupees.

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Is good story.  Very good.  Poland would be proud of new up and coming wordsmith.

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cool poem

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that was realy good i like it good work you were born to be a poet

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Thanks solo, that's really flattering :)

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